Sunday, September 18, 2011

The epic ipod search..in the basement..the FINAL VERSIONN

Jonathan Fischer is taking steps down his own basement hoping that he can find his ipod. The steps are very old wooden and kind of slippery, Jonathan almost falls on his way down. As he takes more and more steps down you begin to hear the the cracking noises on the stairs. Hes almost down to the basement floor but then he runs into spiderwebs..then starts to scream in terror for about 30 seconds. After he regathers his composure he continues on down to the basement floor.

Earlier that day at school during lunch time jonathan was at school his freind Brandon let him borrow his pink ipod touch, but when jonathan came home after school he went down to his basement to get his mothers red and black purse that she had left. When he went down to get the purse for his mom he had on a pair of blue and red shorts on and those had holes in the pocket area. So on his way back upstairs from getting the shorts he slipped and fell on the second to last step and the itouch fell out. So when Jonathan made it to his basement floor he took about 5 steps towards the left and he feels a very dusty object, as he takes his fingers lower and lower he feels a cool sensation on them. Then as he presses down he hears a sudden sound..then he realizes that its the old grand piano his mom bought awhile back. After the sounds from piano fade away he takes a couple more steps towards the right and then he hears a sudden sound from the direction of the stairs, its his mom reminding him that were going out to dinner at pier 39 in about an hour. Jonathan responds to her and after the response he continues looking for the itouch, after walking around for about 15 minutes you hear a big THUD...and then followed by a "FUCKK"..Jonathan ran his big toe into one of the long pipes that run through the basement to upstairs. After the pain goes away he collects himself then proceeds on with his journey.

He recives a phone call from his freind Brandon. He answers and Brandon asks: "what time will you be be able to bring it tomorrow?" and jonathan says: "around lunch time". After jonathans done with the phone call he’s more eager than ever to find that itouch. He back tracks his steps to find where the basement steps are then he takes a seat, after awhile of sitting on that same dusty basement step frustration begins to come upon him. He was getting ready to call brandon back and reschedule a time to give the itouch back...but then an Idea popped into his brain! He figured why doesn’t he just use the backlight on his iphone to get some light and find where  Brandon’s itouch is..he'd done that before to find his moms purse. He unlocked his phone and began to use the light, he walked past all the previous places he had stopped before and looked in other places. Then he walked back towards the steps and underneath them there was a pink shiny object..which was Brandon’s itouch

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